All Comments on 'Exposed'

by sophia jane

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FredricaForeverFredricaForeverover 18 years ago
Lucky Sir

Great story and nice writing. The voyeur aspect makes the whole story more intense. Keep it up. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice

I really must look up more when I walk down city streets. Nice imagery SJ.

SamandirielSamandirielover 18 years ago
SJ

That was extremely stimulating...extremely!!!

Well done.

Sam.

eric shawn listoeric shawn listoover 18 years ago
Hot one, SJ

Hot little story, darlin'. I too will look up from the city streets more often. esl

impressiveimpressiveover 18 years ago
Good Girl

Very good. ~Imp

Softouch911Softouch911over 18 years ago
The usual

Your stories always do the same thing, SJ ... leave me wanting more.

rgraham666rgraham666over 18 years ago
Short, hot and sweet

Very nice.

A bit too much pain for me, but that's just me.

Loved the rest of it though.

lilsubalexlilsubalexover 18 years ago
ohhh...

Just wonderful!!!! i'm sending it to my Master!

Thanks!! *EG*

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
YUMMY

I read stories here all the time, and have never felt the urge to comment on one. I just wanted you to know how much I loved your story. I hope this really did happen for you. I liked it so much that I forwarded it to my Dominant, LOL hopefully maybe He'll take a hint, lol.

Keep up the fantastic work.

stephanie~SD~

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A girl after my own heart...

A female author is so easy to determine sometimes... the flogging aside, this could be me and my man... i found the similarities almost disturbing...but heard from a woman's point of view is quite erotic... a fine story, as are all of yours I am learning... you are delightful...

69Muffin69Muffinabout 17 years ago
Made me wet....

You are also a girl after my own heart. I became so aroused from reading this that I sent it to my Master. I'm hoping that it's an idea that we can re-create soon. :)

sxybibbwsxybibbwabout 17 years ago
sub space

u tok me straight into sub space...mmmm

BarbaraBarbaraover 13 years ago
A beautifully written BDSM experience, lacking some authenticity in actual practice.

Any male sadist could flog a masochistic woman like yourself, on a high-rise balcony, where he's unlikely to be discovered playing his 'BDSM' role.

Public exposure of 'female' needs aside any willingness to expose yourself intimately requires female orgasmic rewards, beyond that written about. In BDSM 'Club' situations, your male partner should offer his turgid penis for either oral or anal attention, taking pride in publicly humiliating himself whenever rejected by you. Most 'SM' Masters allow slaves to offer return demonstrations to prove their passions in public, allowing themselves to orgasm either orally or anally, following those 'genitally focused' female humiliations. -Privately agreed upon 'penis cage' tortures were dutifully rewarded, similarly! BTW: Read all about our 'public BDSM' antics, then educate your male partners to treat you to forced cunnilingus, likewise.

Submissive 'BDSM ladies are rarely fully satisfied by a such sadistic one-sided humiliation! EG; The Story of 'O' featured one submissive masochist lady who branded her sadistic 'Master', with her recently lit Cigar, after giving her involuntary oral sex! Women are rarely victims, of sadistic Male domination?

My dear 'Master' is kept totally naked all day satisfying girl-friends, either using an erect penis or his talented tongue, begging his 'Mistress Barbara' for relief, only once completely sexually exhausted! As a 'CFNM' Mistress, you could insist on 'testosterone' depletion, forcing him to masterbate on command after serving all of your decently dressed female visitors stark NAKED, albeit wearing highly visible anal beads within his wrinkled asshole!

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