All Comments on 'Good Girl, Bad Cop'

"pull over behind that abandoned building and I'll take it easy on you", then he rapes her, AND gives her a ticket, AND to top it off he threatens her life. She wasn't much better, one minute he's tearing her up, then, all of a sudden she's secretly loving it, when he's not even making any attempt to arouse her, and actually has an orgasm. The charactors are switching back & forth, left & right, with no rhyme or reason. Nice premise, but in my opinion, poorly written.

some work. But all in all a good try.

When she gets back into car why not drive off instead of driving to abandon buliding after he tells her he is going to rape her. And then he leaves evidence of his identity by giving her a ticket. He also leaves his DNA all over her, mouth, pussy, face then threatens she better not tell. With all the physical evidence he left he'd be in jail long before he could carry out threat.

How can you leave the marshmallow out? This story should be taken down.

I'm just wonder why he'd give her a ticket. $90 is enough of a reason to turn him in, it will get her out of paying the ticker!!!

I thought it was fuckin hot, and wish you would write more stories. I like your style

Poorly writen and characters not well formed needs much work but could b worse

Oh my god please continue this story

It would be understandable if he threatened her with his gun, but he didn't. She also didn't fight back at all. Biting, scratching...nothing? She wasn't aroused in the beginning so I don't see why she didn't get an adrenaline rush and knee him in the balls or something. She's also supposed to be somewhat smart yet that didn't surface at any point in the story.

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