All Comments on 'Consumed'

You have me converted;

wanting to sin so well...

I enjoyed your poem for it's erotic lure and of course its witty way <grin>

Sweet shutters, and ripples

of souls torn free,

As I became Him,

and He became, Me.

such a perfect array of love in complete surrender and knowing its entire spectrum..you do well in visuals in this ...luvfromblue

The loss of your will in exchange for so much more.

yes,bd

You made me wet and I loved it.

William

*Shiver* God save me from such talent, but not too soon!!