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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz09/21/05

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You write so well;
without saying the words
evoke intense feelings of
pain ... anguish

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by impressive09/22/05

From the heart ...

... is always best. This is brilliant, logo. ~Imp

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by gotwood4909/24/05

as always...

...your writing is concise and to the point. You haven't lost a thing, logo. I'm reading all the rest now. Excellent! Thank you...

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by Bill Dada09/29/05

Just Amazing

First you are amazing to do what you did and then to write about so powerfully...well I'm just sitting here amazed.

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by Honey12310/11/05

{{hugs}}

The way you express your pain, your heartache brought tears to my eyes.

You are a strong person ~

~Honey

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by jgywnn11/20/05

Resolution

Your strength through the pain takes resolution and character. Lovely sad expression of loss and suffering. Very well done. thanks

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by hugo_sam11/20/05

Strong

It takes strength of love and loving to do as you did. Wonderful expression of the regret and loss. Beautiful Logo

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by cloudy11/20/05

heartbreaking

I couldn't do it, but it's a testament to who you are. Very emotional poem.

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by sack11/20/05

I can't believe I missed this....

It's absolutely brilliant! Heartfelt and extremely well written. Hope you are in a better place today!

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by cherries_on_snow05/20/06

Heartwrenching scenario

That was a really emotional moment that you captured well. bittersweet and awful, but well told.

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by LeBroz02/26/08

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems.



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