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Wow!
This is an intense story. The way you write is very impressive, I would love to read the more just like this one.
You write well ...
... but there's something about the situation I don't like. I get that it's only fantasy and all that ... but without trust in her partner, this loses some of its appeal for me. Still, it's certainly a very well thought out and very well written story.
Wicked!
Loved it!!! Reading this with a vibrator resting on my clit and my entrance quivering with wanting for attention, I can not wait to read the conclusion.... Mmm x
OMG
This is such a hot story and very well written. I can't wait to see how she gets out of it.
Found
And when she was found and the police arrived, he went to jail for a very long time which was richly deserved. That being the end to this sad, unbelievable tale.
Really?!!
So her "dom" is ok with her "punishment" her possibly being raped, tortured, kidnapped, killed, going to jail, blackmailed, a number of other horrible things, or a combination of the above? For which something he probably made her do? That is something called a load of crap. You worry me.
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