All Comments on 'Time'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

With each verse

you'll hone your skills;

and in time

will get better and better ~

doing fine so far...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
You've got it exactly right

DC:

You've been a busy lady.

Dwell not on sins of omission, comission, and regrets at night. Think on them only during the light of day.

Nighttime should be reserved for a snifter of brandy, a pipeful of a good tobbaco, and pleasant thoughts of good times, past, and dreams of pleasure yet to come. Thank You. Ronnie W.

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