All Comments on 'Hairy Holly: Soccer Practice'

dumbest most unrealistic fetish story i have read in ages.

It was a waste of time to read this story.

a "bowl movement"? Daughter out of the blue asking you to lick her ass clean???

What a waste of pixels.

Worst story I have ever read on here. Waste of my time - not only is the subject stupid and nasty - your skills as a writer make a 2nd grader look well developed.

Don't ever post again - for the sake of us all.

no big deal. It's a scat story and I've read more bizarre. I actually wish they'd be more bizzaro stuff like this. I think it been more hotter if it was the mother in place of the father.

You must continue this story! Obviously Holly thoroughly enjoyed it and daddy is actually looking forward to being more of a slave to his daughter.I look forward to your next installment.

That story was disgusting....NASTY. God...

...and hot. More adventures of Holly soon please!

I can't judge your sexual wants. But, I think you could write a good story if you didn't seem so rushed and took more of a realistic apporch to it.

As a middle aged man, I will say I loved this story ! I would have loved to be this man, and clean Holly's ass and pussy clean with my tonque. To those who say "ewww, I shit out of my ass and that's just wrong and nasty" I will tell you that there is nothing wrong with licking and tonque fucking a girl's asshole, and you probably don't even enjoy oral sex, because that's where a person pees.

yes it was rushed and unrealistic but for sexual gratification it did the job.

with the last commenter. It was indeed rushed and unrealistic, but simultaneously pretty damn hot! I like both Holly stories and would enjoy reading more about her.

If a story is not your kind, don't rate it. The ratings are mostly 100 or 0. A zero says this was not for you...

so why discourage a hot writer?

Hey you, in VA: Keep going!

Thanks for the great stort, would you mind writing a followup or something simelar?

A daughter with hairy pussy, armpits and asshole? And dad licking her clean?

That is gross beyond words. Nothing erotic about it.

I love hairy pussy and ass holes. I love to smell,lick,a hairy pussy.

I like a woman with a hairy pussy, pits and ass. I love this story.

..My daughter is head cheerleader at her high school, and she recently had a controversy with her coach because she refused to shave her pubic area, and thick dark hairs showed when she did splits. Her Math teacher came to her aid, and she was permitted to keep her thick hair growth and remain on the squad.

@@@ ...well that's a bit tacky looking, lol!! @@@

n addition to refusing to shave, my jock, 18 year old daughter refused to wear a bra.

@@@ ROFL, well that's gotta hurt like fuck running up and down the field!! Prolly against school policy too! (Now I'll have to read up a few, lol;) @@@

But Daddy, if I do that I know that I will get an infection or a rash, and I won't be able to run in soccer, or do the jumps for the cheers."

"Well Baby, I don't know what to do. I didn't bring a handkerchief."

"Well Daddy. I know it's a big request, and you can say no if you want to, but would you lick me clean?"

@@@ buhahahahaha!!!!! I don't know what's funnier, that she would get an infection for not wiping her ass till she got home or asking her dad to lick her shitty ass!! ROFL!! Eww'!! I'll lick clean ass, but daaaaamn!! @@@

Slowly she turned and squatted, with her legs spread wide. I could see the thick patch of rich black hair lining the crack of her buttocks, and could make out the light brown stain of her BM on each side of her buttocks. What I won't do for my gorgeous daughter.

@@@ now the people in the house get to call the cops after seeing some man licking a girls ass in the bushes, hehe! @@@

Oh God, that feels so good Daddy."

"Honey, I am your father, so it is not supposed to feel good. I am just doing my job and helping you out of a tough situation."

"Whatever. Please continue Daddy."

@@@ did he REALLY just say that?!? The author is really going to write him like that after having him lick her ass?!? @@@

Slowly she turned and between broken breaths whispered, "That was the most incredible orgasm I have ever had. Now please clean my wet pussy."

@@@ ...cause licking her pussy with your now shitty tongue would *never* give her an infection, right?? Lol. @@@

These stories are driving my cock wild mmmm

Never get tired of reading this story. Every man should be so lucky.