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Summer Swells

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by Anonymous

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by cymry09/22/05

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"As time torrents disappear"

Lovely.

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by don8765409/22/05

Cool, Smooth....

So gentle by nature....

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by Anonymous09/23/05

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farewell to summer. Nicely done. I admit, I looked up "penetralia", I always like finding a word new to me.

Well done, blue.

Tess

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by My Erotic Tale09/23/05

swell

a swell poem blue, I love what you do with words with your mind painting.(~_*)

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by twelveoone09/24/05

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blue, you have a real talent for alliteration. The poem is fine, this is a suggestion, check out either Norse or Welsh poetry, if you haven't done so already.

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