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happy halloween buddy!
and what a treat it was!
kisses,
T
*Grins
I love it.
I had the pleasure of reading this
a few weeks ago, and still, I like ~!!
Humor, satire and trickery in words.
A great write Art ~ !!
More Plaese~
A good laugh
Nice bit of local color writing with a good ending. This was a pleasant read.
"Leave a PC, Leave a PC, Leave a PC"....
ARTTTTTTTTTT
My sides hurt and tears are running....
Love it hun and I hope you do really well....
Always, Lizzy
Thanks
Lucious, RF, anon and E~
This story was first written as a poem/tale that grew into a ten chapter story currently being reviewed for publication (which is why I haven't submitted them all to 'Lit') I was contemplating on entering one more chapter for my second submission...any thing catch your eye?
(2) passing peanuts (3) the black hole (4) night of the Comet (5) Fishing for Vixens (6) crop circles (7)the eclipse (8)the Jedi Knight (9) Invasion of the Vixens (10) "Good Night Moon" >>> my favorite is chapter ten (he sort of actually goes to the vixen planet
thanks and I hope you enjoy my erotic TALE~
Art how Spectacular each time you write its great
You are the rising comet in writing in all venues. Thank you for the best one yet. Looking for more to come.
It was sheer bootiful
Satin and Lace
Right good readin
That war right good readin, ET, a real knee-slapper, by crackey.
LOL............grins........LOL
and I think.
you are very creative,
I have not read all chapters
but this one made me laugh and smile,
was quite witty !
-sGp-
~~
Talk about neuron misfires!
And I still like that image of the volunteer fire crew, looking for pussy up in a tree (while the cat meows his plaintful tale).
Will be looking for the book.
What can I say?
And I thought I was a headcase! "Yer slicker than greased owl shit Art!" Good luck!
Cookie :D
Veddy interesting, and strange
Maybe just a wee bit over-the-top on the down-home rural dialect for my taste, but very interesting, and imaginative.
Rumple
Ayuh.
Definitely original. Pretty funny. Certainly weird. And I puzzled and puzzed til my puzzler was sore...
"a hoot"
"Shucks" and "Heck fire" your a riot Arto
alby watching for more
Nice departure....
...from the scary stories.....loved it!
Swell
thoroughly enjoyed your story. Bud Waswiser, my favorite character.
Keep on rockin on!
delightfully different
The hokey dialogue reminds me of Petticoat Junction. Perhaps this story needs a suitably "down home" theme song?
Hmmmm....I'll have to dish one up. Good luck!
Grinning
from ear to ear with this one.
Very funny.
Good luck.
Black Tulip
Dialectic dialogue
Is this really the way people talk on the Trinity River? Never mind, dialogue is tough and dialectic is even harder. It's worth a "5."
LOL
Very funny tale, Art...
Happy Halloween...
~Honey
Funny
LOL this was great entertainment. Thanks for the laugh and good luck with the contest :)
Hopelessly Funny
Well done Art, i was looking forward to you particular take on halloween.
Very very funny
Well worth taking the time to read. Had my husband wondering what I was reading because I was laughing.
Fabulous Hun!!
This is a hoot hun!
Brilliantly written
as always, sooooo
funny! I needed a
laugh and this really
did the trick.
Great work babe
~ JC xxx
A High Five
Just on the basis of the title alone. Got to be the best title in the contest, and the story wasn't half bad either!
Great job, MET
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