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by Anonymous

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by cward209/25/05

A soulful poem

I loved this poem. I thought this was a very deep and emotional poem. The last line in particular was extremely soulful in its imagery.
Brilliant stuff

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by RhymeFairy09/25/05

Schweeetttt !!!

Ya gotta love them eh ~
I love your imagery and your lil angel
in da waterless tub .. grins*
Maybe a rubberDuckie might help
... or a slide ... Lol

More Please `

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by LeBroz09/25/05

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So sweet in all her innocence,
how ever can you argue
with her impeccable reasoning,
so logical is its power ~

can see so well,
her plaintiff, soulful look - well done here
on this light piece.

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by Anonymous12/23/05

groan

it pained me to read this.Surely you can do better.

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by Trolly02/11/06

From Under the Bridge

I have to agree with the previous commentor.

"She lets loose and (sic) angry sigh"

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by duddle14602/05/07

decision

Ah...the joys of Mother and daughter having a little one-sided discussion.

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by tazz31705/11/12

AN LISTENING I REPLY

your too small/little for a shower. TK U MLJ LV NV

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