I have been hard for an hour reading!! I will need a break!!
enjoyed it...good story ...
I enjoyed it, but the only problem I had was that you used the word "actually" a lot. It became annoying by the end.
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Great series
I have been hard for an hour reading!! I will need a break!!
slam bam thank ya mam
enjoyed it...good story ...
Like it, but...
I enjoyed it, but the only problem I had was that you used the word "actually" a lot. It became annoying by the end.
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