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A Great Story
With a beautiful humorous twist at the end. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Very very good
A cut far above most of the stories here.
Very well written. A lovely seduction with a deep exposition of the characters.
I especially liked how I was never sure of the main characters attentions until the very end of the story. The uncertainty added much tension to the story.
Well done.
Definitely, a cut above
Okay, there goes my morning. I have to read your others now.
Seductive
amazing tale of seduction. seems so sweet.
Outstanding
Truly Outstanding. Keep writing....
Beautiful
*kisses fingers and tosses the kiss at the monitor* Superb, wonderfully writen. Very well done, and I must say, lovely imagry. You can see every action, and hear every sound, feel and imagine the emotions. Very well writen, hope to read more from you.
Superb
Ditto all the previous comments! Keep writing
Please tell us there's going to be more
This is a wonderful story. I really would like to see another chapter or two or three to it. I love the way you built everything up.
very nice
may I offer you some coffee. nice erotic touch you have there
Sweet story
What a lovely story! Can't wait to read more of your works!
~Honey
love those words
"Because I need to put it back together with parts of me in it." is the sexiest line I've read in quite a while!
Fabulous
I want you to write more and more and then some more.
I want them all
"All your expressions."
Great stuff! I want them all... all of your stories. The dialog is so smooth, I really need to be taking notes.
Great
You never know what you're going to find at a coffee house. A good brew, good conversation and sometimes a lot more. I do like your romances.
Boyd
loved it
Very well written.Not just sexy as hell,but a great story to boot.would love to see what happens with these two.I like the TRUST issue in it too.
First one of yours I've read
But it sure won't be the last. Very romantic, and it ends up being very sexy and sweet at the same time. Makes me want to hang out at Starbuck's, and I'm not even a coffee drinker. Brava! Bravissima!
Very well done
This is the second one I have read of yours. I must say you are very versatile. Great job.
lovely
I have read most of your stories and they are wonderful. The dialogue is witty and some events that happen are just too cute! It makes me think if i was in the heroine's position what would i do? I would probably tell the male character to fuck off because he is arrogant, but in a cute and good way. It is nice that the characters are actually in their character and don't change while they are having sex. wonderful stories.
Sweet sigh and wanting more...
Recidiva, that was wonderful. "Because I need to put it back together with parts of me in it." Oh my...a line that will be remembered always.
You've expressed a lot here. Thanks for sharing it. Bob'sGirl mentioned your work to me last night and I've very glad. I look forward to reading others.
great loved it Kathy
great story Kathy
Amazing!
Such depth of character with so little active description! A well defined environment and action adds to the subtlty of character psychology...And all that without counting the powerful erotic scene...
Kathy?
This was really, really good. In fact, I hope there is more. I love arrogant men, especially if they are possessive AND loving. He'll probably disappoint me, but I like his attitude.
fun, sexy and sensual!
I love this story! I'll be sure to read Chapter 2 as well!
Expecting romance . . .
I found romance as well as powerful eroticism. This is the first story of yours that I've read and what a pleasure it was.
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