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David's Ordeal

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by Anonymous

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by Namizujs09/28/05

Great as all your work!

I liked this very much!

Thanks

John

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by 12/22/07

It may have been the only entry to the contest

But it still made the contest worthwhile! A great story, and excellent description of some complex games.

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by Anonymous12/29/07

More under-the-skirt face sitting please

We need more sexy under the skirt knicker stories like this instead of the usual straight bang bang thankyou mam stuff

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by BobRooney04/13/10

Sexy!

I love satin and dominant women, so this was a real treat for me. Thanks!

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by garyr1968004/22/10

erotic

I'm new to this genre and enjoyed your story very much. I think that I'll be fantasizing about this type of fun more and more in my 'solo' sessions. Thanks.

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Unsure of my comment

Near the end you refer to the "end of his ordeal"? He was stuck in a room with a bunch of horny women that kept sticking his head under their dresses. It sounded like he only struggled for breathe one or two times? Other than worrying about catching a nasty disease, why would this be an ordeal? One thing baffled me. Why wasn't he trying to lick and munch away on all the pussy? This "face sitting" seems to be a silly game. If he starts to have a difficult time breathing and no amount of moving around frees him to breath, use your teeth! He'd breathe in a heart beat.
Sorry. I just don't get it.

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by im18zapakcom02/19/14

Treat!!!!!

It right. I had treat reading this. Wonderful imagination. superb reading experience.
Great!

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by Anonymous03/12/15

Sounds like fun

May all our ordeals be such as this one
Lol

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by ProfDavros06/30/16

Magic

I enjoyed this! Inventive and fun. Easy to picture myself as David - lucky guy.
Your writing flows and is vivid. Looking forward to more of yours!

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