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by RhymeFairy09/25/05

Packs a Punch ~

I can *feel* such emotion here.
Just a lil dry so to speak.
Paint us a picture my friend.
Show us this pain and how it feels
to be the master of all, yet nothing.

I love the feelings here, and you have
a lot of potential.
I feeelll a lot here, just poetry is
... painting, with words to me.
No offense intended,
here is to the next painting
... your Masterpiece ~
*Smiles*

More Please,
because I know you can do this !!!

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