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Sue Serves the Guys

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by Ravenlord09/29/05

Nice work

I always love a good slutty wife story, even though I don't think I'd love it so much in person. Well written little piece. Nothing ground breaking, but it did the trick.

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by Anonymous09/29/05

Interesting Bio

You say as a single guy you would love to see your wife get laid - sounds like a good pick-up line for a whore - does it work(?) and how many times have you been married before the disrespect caused them to walk away from wimpy.

Gee, are the self cuckolding scores telling you anything so far? I think you could upgrade very easily or move it to FETISH along with Pissing where they may appreciate it.

Why not try something credible for yourself and us as any jaded numbnut can write this pitiful male tripe.

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by Anonymous09/29/05

One of the worst

Another story for you sick motherfuckers.

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by Anonymous09/29/05

Sorry

Utter crap, she's a whore, hubby is a fool, hope they both die of aids.......dogfood is a good name for a writer of this shit

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by Anonymous09/29/05

Good writing

Good writing author, but not my cup of tea. He watches his wife get fucked and then says I love you. She still works for Tony, she would get fucked again. It was all about the money for her, and about being a wimp for the husband. I Wonder what she thought of him as a husband? Not much I would guess.

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by gizzmo30109/29/05

ok

A good story, but why dosen't she change jobs, Sue was told no sex and what happened.... Its a sad story, now hubby is a cuckold.

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by Softly09/29/05

Strange People Out There?

Hi Dogfood,

Can you imagine the little old men who get up in the morning, have a cup of coffee, and then click onto Literotica, a sexual story site, when their only reason is to read stories of couples having sex out side of marriage, so that they can write to the authors and tell them that THEY are sick? Give me a break!

Would anyone read stories about married couples having sex just with each other? No, of course not.

Your story was well written. There were a lot of unsaid things. Her boss was not surprised at what she did. He will want some later. And, for the little old men, so will she. Don't think for a moment that she did not knopw exactly what was coming down. When her husband approved her change of clothes, he knew something was up too. you could have used another thousand words to tell how many men she allowed to be with her.

Notice that the really DUMB comments are by "Anonymous ! !

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by sherlock4009/29/05

Strange people in here too.

A basic dumbass story of a wimpy husband who watches ( and stupidly gets turned on by) his inebriated wife getting raped at a party she is working.
I read your bio about wanting to watch your wife "get laid." You also marked single in the status section. Is the pickup line, "Let's get married so I can watch other men fuck you," not working? You write well, but have chosen a poor (my opinion) subject matter.
As to reading stories about married couples having sex together, those stories usually get a five from me while these stories get rated somewhat lower. Is their lower than a 1?

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by MrsCanyon09/29/05

Kick Ass Story

Excellent story. It reminded me of the time's and event's when my wife also entertained at stag parties.
The only sad thing that both my wife and I have to say is, that we were sad to read the end in which you stated that she would not be doing an more entertaining.

Now that she has gotten started and you both enjoyed it, the money it great, have fun and have her do a few now and then.

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by Anonymous09/29/05

consider a change of screen name

I think dogSHIT would be appropriate

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by Anonymous09/29/05

brilliant story

This is BRILLIANT story ,please ignore those retards who dont like the subject matter ,You have to ask why they decided to read it, if all they were going to do is bitch and moan about it?
Just an idea for the retards,if its in this catagory its a good chance its gonna be about rape/reluctance ,thats why its in this catagory ,if you dont like that kind of thing then dont read it ,its not forced (no pun intended)apon you ,no one twisted your arm,no one threatend your life .JUST DONT READ IT !!!

Please keep writing ,i would love to read more

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by terriblegoblin09/30/05

Whats wrong with people?

I am just curious if these people realize that this is a story, written by someone who chose to share his fantasies with a group of strangers. It is only a story, not an incident in real life. It is hard to say how anyone would react if this sort of thing actually happened, but the writer is bold enough to actually put his thoughts down in print. No one should be criticized for his or her imagination. And the subject matter is clearly stated in the category the story is found in. Keep up with the writing, i thought it was great. A few minor errors, but still a GOOD STORY!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous09/30/05

Rethink the ending

I loved it, but please rethink the ending. Let's see.....Sue had a great time, her husband had a great time. Tony and his friends had a great time....NOW I don't think she will be doing this again? PLEASE! It's a win-win-win

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by Anonymous09/30/05

Stupid story

`Is the pickup line, "Let's get married so I can watch other men fuck you," not working?'
But this comment really made me laugh.

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by ladyambar12/05/06

BBW Caribbean Gal...

Are people dumb? Why you read on Literotica?! This are fantasies, people! Tales to entertain the mind, not realities. I sincerely enjoyed the story and I'm a married woman. If you're gonna be so whinny about the story, GO TO ANOTHER CATEGORY AND LEAVE THE AUTHOR IN PEACE. If any of you didn't notice, this is the nonconsent category. I love the story dogfood, thanks!

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by ladyambar12/05/06

BBW Caribbean Gal...

Are people dumb? Why you read on Literotica?! This are fantasies, people! Tales to entertain the mind, not realities. I sincerely enjoyed the story and I'm a married woman. If you're gonna be so whinny about the story, GO TO ANOTHER CATEGORY AND LEAVE THE AUTHOR IN PEACE. If any of you didn't notice, this is the nonconsent category. I love the story dogfood, thanks!

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by horny2play6906/27/12

I think this story is very HOT and arousing for sure !! I think another chapter is in order. You have an opportunity to have Sue take this in many directions with her husband's support. Tony can provide the place and people, etc. Thanks !

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