Great story kept me hot and held my interest all the way through. Please do write more about this family. I can't wait to hear about the honeymoon is Jamaica. I went to Hedonism II once and screwed like crazy, my womb and bum were sore for a week.
Great story. I hope you continue with this line, and that it only gets more nasty. Maybe some golden showers and/or felching..... Thanks again for a great read.
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Anonymous09/28/05
your son is a faggot and somebody bitch
what kind of marriage,start out like this.i see why you are divorced.
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Anonymous09/28/05
A TEN!
A great read. Non stop action. Completely and deliciously perverse.
Please disregard the last idiot's comments. I guess some people just do not have the intelligence to differentiate between reality and fantasy.
by
Anonymous09/28/05
Hot, but info missing
It was hot, but how did the threesome start, how did the son-friend start? And she didn't ask?
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Anonymous09/28/05
hot story
oh please let us know how the honey moon went with jerrys mom and best man.. dont forget to throw in a few young maids too lol
How is Mom going to get pregnant if she gets it in the ass!
Come on, didn't you learn anything in SexEd?
Serioulsy, cute story
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Anonymous09/29/05
Terrific
well written & exciting. Water sports & menstrual sex would add variety.
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Anonymous10/01/05
Too bad...
.. it started with anal - a real downer. Dung pushing is so gross!
Stan
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Anonymous04/16/06
some folks can only find fault
these stories are written by amateurs for our enjoyment --and this story has all the makings of a classic.it is surely very hot ,very arousing ,decadent and erotic all in one .
why then do these complaining ar****oles,feel obliged to knock it ,making minor and trivial complaints. do they not have the common sense to go to another story that will suit them better,or do they like to try to impress by their futile observations, have they never heard of poetic licence.
i really do feel they are beneath comtempt.
Walterio ,your story sure lit my fire ,please continue to write. the vast majority find your work brilliant.
thank you
robert
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Anonymous01/09/07
Ho hum
Another mindless description of a 'mother' used as a sex toy by her son, his wife, his butch partner, etc. Ass fucking is not the aim of sex. You fetishists should try writing about something other than dominating women by fucking them in the ass. Thanks.
DON'T listen to those negative Submission, I bet you all those NEGATIVE readers got off, keep writing, but make it longer I like the bi in it, and beleive me I'am straite as an arrow, but I like to read about it. Bring more families into the mix, got off in each chapter, whew, my hand went stiff on me. more more. THANKS!!!
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Anonymous05/22/07
Just what I wanted to read
Incredible. Possibly the hottest thing I've read all year. I'd kill to be any of these characters for a while.
why after Biff fucked Marla would joannie say ""Relax Marla there will be a little pain at first, then some cramping and a bloated feeling. After that it will feel good and you will wonder why you waited so long to have your ass and pussy fucked at the same time."
when Jerry starts to fuck his mom wouldnt Marlas ass already be spread open enough for her son now?
Pat
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Anonymous10/17/07
A lot of fun
thanks for this I enjoyed every line and look forward to the next part, it was good fast steam driven fantasy and I enjoyed it fully. For those who didn't that's ok too just look for something else, so easy to say something bad and lacking constructive value.
Keep on with the great work
Penny
I loved your story. It's fun to able to fantasize about things like this. Please keep the story going. Sex on vacation is one of my favorite story lines!
My wife and I go to Hedo (Negril, Jamaica) every year halloween. We will be leaving Oct 26th and be back Nov 5th. You can see and do lots there. Hedo has to areas "prude side" and "nude side". Except to go to the buffet or restaraunts we almost never go to the prude side. Lots of bi/gay women there, but not so much for bi/gay men (some but not many and they are not so open about thier relationships as the women are). Good story!!!!!!!!!!!
I've been to Jamaica 4 times so far. Twice with my first wife, once when my youngest son got married and then again when I got married for the second time. 3 of those times was at Hedonism II, an all inclusive resort with a nude and a prude beach. It's been renovated and remodeled since I was there and it's still an all inclusive resort but now clothing optional.
Now that I'm divorced, I have another trip planned with 2 young ladies who want me to be their "guide"....... Probably late summer or early fall since they have to save up for the trip. They initially wanted to pay me to go with them but I told them just going with them would be enough pay.... ;-)
English
Hot! Hot! Hot!
Great story kept me hot and held my interest all the way through. Please do write more about this family. I can't wait to hear about the honeymoon is Jamaica. I went to Hedonism II once and screwed like crazy, my womb and bum were sore for a week.
Hot & Horny
Definately a lot more.
WoW
Great story. I hope you continue with this line, and that it only gets more nasty. Maybe some golden showers and/or felching..... Thanks again for a great read.
your son is a faggot and somebody bitch
what kind of marriage,start out like this.i see why you are divorced.
A TEN!
A great read. Non stop action. Completely and deliciously perverse.
Please disregard the last idiot's comments. I guess some people just do not have the intelligence to differentiate between reality and fantasy.
Hot, but info missing
It was hot, but how did the threesome start, how did the son-friend start? And she didn't ask?
hot story
oh please let us know how the honey moon went with jerrys mom and best man.. dont forget to throw in a few young maids too lol
EXCELLENT!!!
please keep writing more. i totally enjoyed it
Too Bad about Anal
How is Mom going to get pregnant if she gets it in the ass!
Come on, didn't you learn anything in SexEd?
Serioulsy, cute story
Terrific
well written & exciting. Water sports & menstrual sex would add variety.
Too bad...
.. it started with anal - a real downer. Dung pushing is so gross!
Stan
some folks can only find fault
these stories are written by amateurs for our enjoyment --and this story has all the makings of a classic.it is surely very hot ,very arousing ,decadent and erotic all in one .
why then do these complaining ar****oles,feel obliged to knock it ,making minor and trivial complaints. do they not have the common sense to go to another story that will suit them better,or do they like to try to impress by their futile observations, have they never heard of poetic licence.
i really do feel they are beneath comtempt.
Walterio ,your story sure lit my fire ,please continue to write. the vast majority find your work brilliant.
thank you
robert
Ho hum
Another mindless description of a 'mother' used as a sex toy by her son, his wife, his butch partner, etc. Ass fucking is not the aim of sex. You fetishists should try writing about something other than dominating women by fucking them in the ass. Thanks.
Beverley
not worth the effort to read
Poorly written, little or no character development, no effort to make the reader empathize or relate to the characters.
HOT!!! HOT!!! EXCELLANT HOT!!! 100 5 by 5
DON'T listen to those negative Submission, I bet you all those NEGATIVE readers got off, keep writing, but make it longer I like the bi in it, and beleive me I'am straite as an arrow, but I like to read about it. Bring more families into the mix, got off in each chapter, whew, my hand went stiff on me. more more. THANKS!!!
Just what I wanted to read
Incredible. Possibly the hottest thing I've read all year. I'd kill to be any of these characters for a while.
Biff and Marla
why after Biff fucked Marla would joannie say ""Relax Marla there will be a little pain at first, then some cramping and a bloated feeling. After that it will feel good and you will wonder why you waited so long to have your ass and pussy fucked at the same time."
when Jerry starts to fuck his mom wouldnt Marlas ass already be spread open enough for her son now?
Pat
A lot of fun
thanks for this I enjoyed every line and look forward to the next part, it was good fast steam driven fantasy and I enjoyed it fully. For those who didn't that's ok too just look for something else, so easy to say something bad and lacking constructive value.
Keep on with the great work
Penny
Nice idea
Pity about the unrealistic sexual prowess of your characters who make the story hard to believe.
More Please!
I loved your story. It's fun to able to fantasize about things like this. Please keep the story going. Sex on vacation is one of my favorite story lines!
such a fascination with anal
just love this fantasy incest tale,,,,but not a fan of anal,,,,yet it is paramount in this tale,,,oh well,
HOTTT!!!
Awesome story. Love when moms become sluts to son and his friends.
Hedo
My wife and I go to Hedo (Negril, Jamaica) every year halloween. We will be leaving Oct 26th and be back Nov 5th. You can see and do lots there. Hedo has to areas "prude side" and "nude side". Except to go to the buffet or restaraunts we almost never go to the prude side. Lots of bi/gay women there, but not so much for bi/gay men (some but not many and they are not so open about thier relationships as the women are). Good story!!!!!!!!!!!
more please
please add some more adventures of the four of them on the honeymoon with some more characters thrown in for good measure
Hot! Very HOT!!
Thank You for a very enjoyable story. I plan to read all in this series. Thanks again.
Another HOT FICTION story.......
I've been to Jamaica 4 times so far. Twice with my first wife, once when my youngest son got married and then again when I got married for the second time. 3 of those times was at Hedonism II, an all inclusive resort with a nude and a prude beach. It's been renovated and remodeled since I was there and it's still an all inclusive resort but now clothing optional.
Now that I'm divorced, I have another trip planned with 2 young ladies who want me to be their "guide"....... Probably late summer or early fall since they have to save up for the trip. They initially wanted to pay me to go with them but I told them just going with them would be enough pay.... ;-)
Oh, and you still need that editor....... ;-)
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