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by sweet GA peaches

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cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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"Until every vowel breaks, with longing"

Nice word play.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Ypur poem has been mentioned in the new poems review thread.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I luv the way you

play with all your words in this one...you are tops...luvfromblue

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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finally ~

In this game of life,

I want to buy a vowel;

so send Miss Vanna off to get

a really, really big "o"....

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Great write! I especially love the ending. :)

Curiouswife

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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The broken vowel blues, I so loved the ending.

ty,bd

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