I thought this was great, you still worked the angle of the commitment to both couples and even with his "cruel" looks and sounds, respect and devotion still showed. This was another hot story, and you'll need to hurry with part 3 or I will have to hunt you and your co-author down and shoot you!!!!
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Hot!!!
I find a lot of erotic stories written by men so horribly unrealistic from the woman's point of view. This one, though far fetched, is hot, hot, hot!
Wow
I thought this was great, you still worked the angle of the commitment to both couples and even with his "cruel" looks and sounds, respect and devotion still showed. This was another hot story, and you'll need to hurry with part 3 or I will have to hunt you and your co-author down and shoot you!!!!
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