All Comments on 'Becoming Patty's Property Ch. 02'

by Dante Ryan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
More descriptive

Itd be much better had you put some more descriptive sex in there somewhere.

But keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Where's Chapter 3

You commented in September that Chapter 3 was coming soon yet it's now February?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wuss

wimp, coward. Just once have him say no and actually get beaten. Or run away. Or something.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Impatient for more!

I've really enjoyed this series. If you complete more chapters, that would be terrific! Maybe Patty will bring friends over to watch, or even share her trophy. Or maybe she has a highly unappealing aunt who smokes and complains a lot ...

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