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by Ronnie Wachuka10/01/05

Very Nice

A nice tight little story. I'm going to have to read more of your stories. Thank You. Ronnie W.

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by rgraham66610/01/05

Sweet and hot

Nice piece of work.

The authour did a fine job of building up the scene with a delightful minimum of words.

Well done.

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by don8765410/01/05

Great

But needs more....a lot more!

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by Anonymous03/25/07

Waiting For The Climax

A wonderful buildup that leaves the climax to the readers imagination. Well Done.

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