A nice tight little story. I'm going to have to read more of your stories. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Nice piece of work.
The authour did a fine job of building up the scene with a delightful minimum of words.
But needs more....a lot more!
A wonderful buildup that leaves the climax to the readers imagination. Well Done.
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