All Comments on 'Do You Remember Ch. 01'

written, a very intriguing story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Very interesting story - looking forward to the next half....

Does the ex wife feature in it, in anyway?

is killing me. Is this mean mother of all bitches going to become the ass fucking dominatrix I see coming?

Excellent character development of all the participants. (even Mr. Tweed).

The reader was given insight as to the makeup of Ben very early on. The relationship with his wife was purely sexual.

The breakup and divorce seemed a little long to play out but I would guess this served to enhance the development of "Ben" to the reader.

Very good so far. I just hope the next chapter doesn't see this lawyer impaled on his new friend's 12" dildo while handcuffed to a bed in a hotel romm. Her in a leather dom outfit and him chained, collared, whipped and dildo fucked cum slut.

Great so far...

Looking forward to the conclusion.

FC

Interesting. A cunt is made for fucking, and a dick is made to piss and fuck with. End of argument.

write your story and we will read and not tell you how it will end.i have enjoy the way the guy carry himself.why would someone want him to become a wimp, because had balls to drop the wife who cheated.

You covered a lot of territory in this first chapter and did it well. You hit all of the highlights while still giving us enough detail to understand the characters. The only thing that gave me pause was the introduction of Michelle. I had to back up and reread a little to see if I had missed something. I will be looking forward to chapter 2.

just like my title too long and boring

3 pages just for a date

this must be your real life.

No sure about this one but will read the next part to see

Enjoyable read - well written and well plotted with interesting characters. Waiting to see where the author takes this. Thanks for an enjoyable read.

Fun story. The coffee shop interactions between Ben and Allison were enjoyable and humorous. But when do we get the rest?

H.

Going back and checking up on stories I wanted to follow up on, I re-read "Do You Remember, Ch 1." When can we expect the next chapter to be posted?

Come on, now...you got us interested, so you can't just drop the whole story at this point. Please let us know something.

Thanks!

I quit before finishing the first page....

Never wise to put chapter one; when you might not get around to chapter two. But it is certainly understandable why there was no chapter two.

You can write, unlike most loving wife authors...More please.. Cheers Yoron..

Looking forward to chapter #2. Great job.

However, I'm seldom on this site so I don't expect to read Ch 2.

The story was posted on 10/2005,and no followup chapters. It's just a shame too, it's a good story. I'm not going to knock the author, might be the author is no longer with us.What ever the case is, the first chapter is still worth reading.Thank You.........Rich

story about?

It might have been an outstanding story had you ever finished it.

Guess this is a reminder to us readers to check for the end of a story before investing time reading the beginning.

I have to go with oldwayne. The interaction between our hero and Allison was very enjoyable to read, it makes it so much more disappointing that you never finished this.

contrived crock of shit I didn't bother to read...

However, I read the comments then rated it 1*.

forges memories to front/ TK U MLJ LV NV

she fell up a flight of stairs

...will be finished soon...

yeah...now that was 7 years ago...great work, man..

9 years and still no ideas how to finish??

Sometimes I wait to rate a tale until it is finished.

HA HA HA HA HA

Ambles along from one situation to another, he knows how to pick them, Alison is as nutty as a Dundee cake, please continue story.

shitty unfinished story.

You should just die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A collection of arseholes.

Pleased this author did not finish the story

Not a bad start to a story.

This was written dome time ago so what happened to chapter 2 b!

Perhsps FTDS can use his magic on the next installment.

Only 1*, which is a shame because this had the makings of a really good story, decent characters, nice story line (so far), and a nice cliffhanger end to chapter one. HOWEVER, where is the ending or at least chapter two, that was promised on the first of October 2005. It doesn't take 15 years to write one chapter..

I wasted all the time reading part one to find out there is no part two.

waiting after 16 years.

Another unfinished story.

What is with these authors?

Scores 1/5

Well written. Strong, engaging characters. Interesting Backdrop. You done good.

LWlurker

I am guessing that the story was not finished because the author died or lost interest or … though the last words do not suggest a lack of interest. So, this story is unlikely to be finished and that suggests that a more forgiving attitude might be in order. Or not. Perhaps someone could finish the story—the new potential girlfriend sounds like a bundle of neuroses so the potential for craziness exists though she could just be nervous around someone she likes. Could go a lot of ways …romance, btb, return of the ex, etc.