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by sack10/03/05

rather different treatment

of the visitation by a spirit theme. The characters are interesting and you may want to consider making this into a short series. Good luck!

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by cookiejar10/26/05

Interesting ...

The story was fairly predictable but I enjoyed it. You had a few words spelled wrong and a few grammar mistakes but they didn't detract. Good luck!

Cookie :)

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by 10/29/05

Nicely written

a couple of inconsistencies, such as you said it was storming but the moonlight didn't shine on him...but otherwise, I really enjoyed it. Good job.

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