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by LeBroz09/28/05

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An hour after breakfast,
you've got me salivating already,
awaiting on a hot dinner...

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by Anonymous09/29/05

ohhh...

who does not luv Italian...food that is...great images...bluerains

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by Anonymous12/05/05

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hmm. I gave this a 4 a few days ago...how does it still have a 5?

This is an okay food poem,techically fine, but I did not feel anything beyond description. ~as

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