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Little too much
She is your sister. Didn't care for this one. A little too brutal. Since ages 4 & 1, she was giving you all. THink you made the charater an ASS!
Some people just don't get it!
This has been a great series so far! A wonderful story of seduction and youthful lust, even if it is between half-siblings. The previous commentator didn't even know what (s)he was talking about. The "since ages 4 and 1" quote was referring to how long the step-father had been in the picture, not how long the children had known each other! Stop beating your loins long enough to actually understand the story!
This series has been fairly well descriptive of the pleasures and pains, as well as the emotions and thoughts of the two main characters to this point, especially the way the author jumps back and forth from Roy's to Amy's perspectives! You can almost understand their reactions to each other's behaviors (although I am not sure how the father could say, "Hurry up, we brought home KFC" in such a way that Roy might even further wonder how much their step-father knew. Now, if their step-father had said "After you two have cleaned each other up...", then I could completely understand Roy's concern. ;-)
I can hardly wait to read the rest of the series and I am hoping that they will all be as good as the first eight chapters. I hope that the introduction of other family members that I have seen in the descriptions of the next several chapters doesn't ruin the relationship between Amy and Roy, but I look forward to finding out! Keep it up!
The jig is up
'Bout time to throw one dirty old man into the mix...Amy needs to find another family member who doesn't want to fuck her...but...then the story would most likely suffer...Never mind...
hope he impregnates her
if not her soreness is for nothing
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