All Comments on 'A Date with Delilah'

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. it'd be nice to have a continuation about these characters if possible.

I also have a 'thing' for vampires. This story was wonderful. Most stories dealing with vampires have a real vampire in them, I like the fact that you didn't do that, you did a role play scene very well. I would love to see more stories with these characters as well.

Delightfully written - fluid, intelligent, enjoyable, and lively. The sex is delicious, even for those without a "thing for vampires," and the characters and interactions are warm and real. Very nice work.

but very nice.

The authour did an excellent job with the characters and their growing attraction with each other. The emotions involved were sweetly described.

Very sweet, and hot.

Well done.

Good luck with the contest and may all your halloween haunts come true....

Always, Lizzy

I read your halloween contripution, very indepth and well written, thanks Art~

and much better than the usual stereotyped vampire story.

Good luck in the contest!

Definitely not what I was expecting from the first few paragraphs... but I was very pleasantly surprised. The plot was romantic, the characters engaging and the writing was great.

use of a vampire theme. I liked it very much. Not only was the sex hot, but you made the characters into real people too.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

Not quite what I was expecting, and somehow expecting the fated twist at the end made the actual ending much better.

Keep up the excellant story-telling!

This story was really terrific & really HOT <grins & wipes sweat from brow>. Can't wait to read more of this author's stories.

...i think i have a thing for vampires too now.

loved it - sex and fun - a smoking hot combination!

I swear this is a story to remember. Ive read about 300 works af art from Literotica but yours has procured a special place in my memory.

...with all of the other comments! First rate story you've got yourself there, bub! The characters were well characterized, the sexy quite sexy, and the vampire ... well, semi-vampiric, which in this case worked perfectly!

This is still one of my favorites! Very funny, very sexy.

Alas, I am Jonah...

That's really sweat!

I like the ending and I like the 'let's play' parts as much as... No even more than most 'real' vampire stories.

That's fucking awesome!

Please start writing again... Please!

I've read each of the four stories you have posted here and they are all wonderful, erotic gems - 5 stars each. This one and Halloween Favor do the best of showing the character of your characters. Hoping that you will write more soon.

Just found your stories..and they are polished gems. Wish you were still writing on this site. Thanks....

I love that your characters have great kinky sex because they share amazing chemistry, clear communication, and enthusiastic consent. That's how it works in the real world, ideally. It also helps if everyone's on the same page regarding cuckoo clocks. (My personal feeling is they are a menace.)

I hope you come back soon

Stephen J

Terrific narrative, and genuine humor mixing well with the eroticism. I've read it four times and my only regret is still: damn, I wish I'D written that!

I was sightly expecting Deliah to be a real vampire, which would be really hot with his fetish. But this story was just as delicious. Thanks for posting!

I'm just having a great time working through your stories;- super hot and very well written!

What a great story 5 stars. Thanks for sharing.

Well written, believable and adorable

Amazing amazing plot and the characters were SO real. I LOVE the way Joe tells the story and gives over the narrative. Wonderfully done, start to finish. EASIEST five-star rating I have given here, maybe ever. :)

I would also love to see a follow-up story to this - GREAT twist of plot that she was not a real vampire -- made the characters all the more real. Would love to see a "down the road apiece" check-in peek at how their relationship is going.

My wife and I both have a "thing" for vampires - and like Joe, I like being in the "victim" role and my wife relishes being in vampiress mode. So I really related to this wonderful story!

This was a great story !!! I figured it would end up with her being the owner of the company. And an actual vampire. And this was how she found her willing victims. But I liked how you ended it.

Thank you for sharing your story !!!