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Mmmm

I love it~!!

Very sexy.

I can feel you wanting to let it go,

and just rollll with it ... her.

Very hot n steamy write.

Sexy ~

More Plez~

Welcome to Lit,

with this your first try;

this goes from warm to sizzlin'

in just a few steps ... ...

what else ya got for us??

thanks for the read~

"Such power in your stormy, determined gaze

We both know exactly what we need

How easy it would be to overcome the delays…"

It never ceases to amaze me how much emotion can be packed into a few lines.