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Goes to show ~
two can play at this game;
it's just a question
of how the string's played out.
Nice one.
Strung UP~
slipping
one thought in,
another thought out.
Twisting throughout,
repression and release
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I just love these lines.
Great imagery and flow. I can see it all playing out b4 me. Just tempting and teasing you till .... Grrr
Very fresh too. Love it~
You go gurl ~!!
More Please~
curious
thanks for the read~
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rarely leave comments, votes, I make an exception with this
FAV lines....
"Tempting a mouse
with scrumptious tales
full of holes".
....and who has not
but done this before..
only to be ,
STRUNG ...
well done my friend,
and done well.
-sGp-
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"I tongued the bait
and plucked his string."
...and the mouse gets her prize.
Clever poem, thank you for the read.
Cunning...
and hot!
Is this the squeaking sound Tzara thought he heard?
Wonderful images, CW!
Fly
this trap is......
hot and the string is a great tease too. very nice......don
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