All Comments on 'Autumn'

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TzaraTzaraover 18 years ago
Tommy Time blows on his trumpet

Raindrops falling on my head

Water wears away stone koan

Cook calls "dinner." Guys, you win.

WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
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This was a real blast to read. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
If I was in charge .................

.............of dishing out the "E"s this poem would get one. Great work and a breath of fresh air.

Tess

Man RayMan Rayover 18 years ago
This is good...

...so `nuff said.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
In verse...

Enjoyed the take off on several old tunes. Quite clever.

darthjserdarthjserover 16 years ago
Thinking of one thing?

The lady gives what he wants, he grins unsure now - she grins too, "hey, all of us are living together"

two merry couples, making love, now that's better than a job!

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