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by LeBroz10/02/05

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Nicely done here,
the way you telegraph exhaustion
as a couple
find strength and solace
in each other...

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by sweet GA peaches10/02/05

A wonderful thought....

a man who loves his woman
and his children,
enough to be tired to the bone,
and still giving ..

****very sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet****

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by RhymeFairy10/02/05

Aww, Sweetie Pie you ~

I like it Cymry.
Reads a lil like a list, but it is good.
You bring out the passion
... yes I said passion, in this poem.
Work on imagery, not telling.
Then you will OWN us ...
*Smiles*
Good work here and soo dannng sweet ~!!!

More Plez~

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by Anonymous10/02/05

a love worth

working on...and for sounds like a great movie...with a happy ending in store...thats the kind with wet eyes for a soft heart...blue

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