All Comments on 'Steamy Night'

Expectations of the author's name,

so well satisfied here

with visions of passion's fire

and post-orgasmic bliss...

Grr~

I love your rhyme and imagery. *Smiles*

You held us close

and gave freedom

to ... release~

Yummy poem of erotic

delights,

that take flight ~

Meowwww~

Your poem was mentioned in the thread "New Poems Reviews"

If you are going to rhyme, stick to your scheme.

"within" and "them" do not rhyme.

more work than its rhyme scheme--which is okay. Sometimes, near rhymes work out just fine. You may want to give free verse a try and watch out for too many cliches. :)

Keep writing and loving what you do.

DC:

I'm proud of you! Thank You. Ronnie W.