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interesting
but nothing more, in my opinion.
Wonderful
A delightful exploration of the tribulations of learning poetry. I was puzzled by the appearance of foliage at the end.
Fly
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God a strange combination of horror film, advanced images, and fifties do-wop.
I'm in love.
can cracks stumble?
Otherwise, I like the poem, even the foliage reference!
very nice
wonderful to be able to read you again, after so long, yours was my first one. love you dear friend
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Your writing is a lot like photomantage.
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The clarity of the natural world...
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