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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/03/05

interesting

but nothing more, in my opinion.

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by Anonymous10/03/05

Wonderful

A delightful exploration of the tribulations of learning poetry. I was puzzled by the appearance of foliage at the end.

Fly

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by twelveoone10/03/05

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God a strange combination of horror film, advanced images, and fifties do-wop.
I'm in love.

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by sack10/04/05

can cracks stumble?

Otherwise, I like the poem, even the foliage reference!

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by Anonymous10/05/05

very nice

wonderful to be able to read you again, after so long, yours was my first one. love you dear friend

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by Bill Dada01/15/06

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Your writing is a lot like photomantage.

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by LeBroz01/29/07

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The clarity of the natural world...

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