All Comments on 'Clarity'

by annaswirls

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
interesting

but nothing more, in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wonderful

A delightful exploration of the tribulations of learning poetry. I was puzzled by the appearance of foliage at the end.

Fly

twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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God a strange combination of horror film, advanced images, and fifties do-wop.

I'm in love.

sacksackover 18 years ago
can cracks stumble?

Otherwise, I like the poem, even the foliage reference!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very nice

wonderful to be able to read you again, after so long, yours was my first one. love you dear friend

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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Your writing is a lot like photomantage.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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The clarity of the natural world...

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