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by Anonymous

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by sweet GA peaches10/03/05

NOW THERE ...

is a KISS !
left my lips longing
for that tingling sensation
that ever lasting evalation
of rejuvination,
that sparks the madness,
and ties,
to these ...lips...
OH THAT KISS !



-sGp-

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by Anonymous10/03/05

you need to write more

passion...kisses in the wind 4 U perhaps...nice romantic piece...luvfromblue

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by LeBroz10/03/05

~~

I've sent you my 2¢ worth;
beyond that, you've stirred
memories of lips' morsels
I've tasted....yum

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by Bill Dada10/09/05

9 Steps...

...to the perfect kiss. Very nice.
ty,BD

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by RhymeFairy10/22/05

Sounds like ...

One of those kisses
that just curls tha toes
and makes tha mind explode. ~!!!

Yummy Art, so likin that image,
and that feeling. Great sexy lil
piece of poetry here ~

More Plez~

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