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could be extended a bit.....
The sex is a bit matter of fact, and there is enough material here for a longer story.
damn it was nice
i really enjoyed this story
I agree
I really liked the story, but it would have been nice to have had a slightly extended version. The scenario you created was hot and plausible enough. I liked the story, it's a sign of success that I was dissapointed there wasn't more of it.
Good job
Liked it and agree with what has been said so far. A sequel would definitely be worthwhile.
WOW..my husband wants to be the wolfman,now!
Very hot! My husband wants to be the wolfman..I'll be in search of a gag.
Keep up the good work:)
Wow that was
really hot. It gave me some wonderful ideas. Thanks n2...
Talk about REVENGE...
Good luck with the contest..This was purely evil ...Was wondering when they'd find out it was the wrong guy...
Very nice!
Not a fan of the mention of "c cup" breasts near the beginning (a pet hate of mine) but the story was hot. I'd have liked more detail though!
delicious!
loved it! part 2?!
Hard to Find
Found this story years ago. Took me two hours to find it again. My head is swimming form all the searching, and not in a good way! Can you add the tags, "Mistaken Identity" and "revenge"? Sometime a few years from now I may be searching for this story again. Thanks!
Cliche, (Smothers brothers)
You've got democrats who are less ons and you got republicans who are more ons. You are a republican which makes you a Moron.
Hell no.
It's off to jail for these bitches. Dumbass story.
Hot
Just about any guys wet dream. Super hot, other than getting stuff shoved in his ass, but he made out ok in the end :-)
Fun setup nicely done!
Loved this twisted tale of retribution gone wrong.
It could be lengthened for added reader pleasure by increasing the things done to David, teasing him lots, a little CBT, forced to service the women (plus a few others from the party) orally etc.
I'd like to hear about the offered "more nights like tonight".
In any case, I love your work, more please!
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