by HotsMyMuse
Excellent use of anticipation! Very well written. Tantilizing and exciting. Explicit, but not vulgar. And the first person narrative was perfect! By all means, more!
This story is a classic... if it does not get your heart racing... call a doctor immediately. The use of tease and anticipation is masterful. It shows the passionate, intuitive understanding of a mans most basic need. She is an artist. lease write more!