10 Minutes

hot

That was wonderful. That was really hot, their sweaty bodies coming together. Susana eating M-Y till she couldn't take anymore. Really nice. Thank you.

Hot

Hot is putting it mildly .

Beautiful and uplifting.

Restores my faith, thank you.

Short and sweet and soooo well written.

" 'Oh, I am so gonna make you orgasm first,' she claimed.
You can never hear that too much, I thought."

I am disappointed

That this is the last story you posted, eight years ago. These were all very good. Thanks.

I found a diamond in the rough of wanna be bona fide erotic stories. 10 Minutes will definitely stay with me for days, months and years to come.

Second that

I agree with the comment below... just hate it when stories like this was just left there unfinish... its abit unfair to readers... i know writers have lives outside of their writing though i hope if they will leave the story hanging... at least give enough thought on when a follow up will be done or better yet just finish the damn thing prpoerly.

Finished Story

This lovely tale is finished - where they go from here is up to the reader to decide. I join the others who regret M-Y is no longer writing. EP