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The Perfect Rhythm Between Us

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by Anonymous10/04/05

~I~

your poem is mentioned in the new poems review thread.

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by sweet GA peaches10/06/05

MY FAV LINES....

"Each thrust,
The perfect rhythm between us"


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what a way to punch !
-sGp-

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