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Oh, I like that ~ liquid rhythm;
such languid sensuality held within
painted on blue...
Nice
But why the short lines? "Liquid rhythm" seems to call for a more flowing format.
Thanks, Blue
Fly
~I~
featured in the new poems review thread.
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Lovely imagery in this one. Well done.
wonderful
Others may have problems reading this but I did not, I also don't read with technical (critical) eyes either...but your poem is fine and put a smile on my face...thanks Art~
GURL ...........
you made me want to put
on tight jeans ,
just to take them off..
wow !
what a vivd image you
paint of that beautiful
denim blu.......
*winks*
got a 5 from me !!
-sGp-
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