Very funny at the end. Heh, "She knew all her parents secrets", that sounds so much like a teenaged girl, it's not even funny. It's beautifully written, great dialoge, and wonderful seduction. Could use a bit better description of the surrounds, but all in all, I did enjoy it.
carry on to part2
excellent writing and great read cant wait for part two
Very hot story! And the ending cracked me up! You can't leave it like this! I'll be waiting for part two. :)
Someone's a Jersey native...
It's a familiar plot with an interracial twist. I loved the way the lil white girl pressured the black teacher to give in, proving that all humans enjoy passion and lust no matter what color you are. Fabulous!
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