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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Your poem...........

........is mentioned in the new poems review thread.

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f-cynyrf-cynyrabout 18 years ago
and the pump

don't work cous the vandals stole the handle

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Okay ~ I'll give it a 5

For the beat;

Almost something to dance to!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
fascinating rythmn.

This rythmic poem could almost be converted into Rap. The poem is fast paced and moves rapidly from verse to verse - almost as if the Poet is in a hurry. Interesting!

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Ultra descriptive...

"with their white teeth and ya starin' eyes". The images were just pouring out as I read. Nice job.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.

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DawnJDawnJover 12 years ago
Musical

Your rhyming makes a definite rhythm for this "tune"! Cool!

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Sigh, People tend to assume more often than not - sad, because they do it based on themselves and not on the other. My writes are me... If you want a clue - they are there to see. When you DO take the time to read and hear my thoughts behind your eyes... perhaps I won't see...