by Ancient117331
........is mentioned in the new poems review thread.
Tess
This rythmic poem could almost be converted into Rap. The poem is fast paced and moves rapidly from verse to verse - almost as if the Poet is in a hurry. Interesting!
"with their white teeth and ya starin' eyes". The images were just pouring out as I read. Nice job.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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