All Comments on 'A Box, a Woman and Time Ch. 04'

by Lavared

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sacksackover 18 years ago
I'm not sure...

if the situation is as effective going from menacing to benign, Not that I wanted her to torture him, it just seemed the entire perspective changed as the story unfolded.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
odd and sappy at the end, but original

Thre were some loose ends, and it seemed no more special with her than with the others. Overall, it was entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
What Style and Fervor

Totally impressed with your talent and imagination from the foundation up. More please - thanks - with high Regard

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
One of the best

This was one of the best, most satisfying stories I've read on Literotica. Brava!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow

Officially the best story on Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
It makes the top class, easily

Great imagination and fantastic writing. One of the best stories I've ever read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
super cute

This story was super cute. It had an original concept and an interesting mystery and a sweet conclusion.

VoidedVoidedabout 14 years ago
Whoa

Wow, Holy hot dang! I just read this entire series and Whoa, I've been lurking around this site for a while now and yours is definately one of the best, if not THE best I have read thus far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Best story on here!

Capricorn62Capricorn62over 6 years ago
Missing something

A really good story, well written. Just that I miss some moral implications and it had just been perfect for me.

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