A Hotel Trip

DItch the witch

Cheaters get what they deserve! My only question is that he'd left her a message so she knew he was in the hotel. She should have figured out she was had when he made no more attempts to contact her.

Good work
Hal

Still, a confrontation would have been fun!

He handled it well. I think I would have at least walked by abd said so long.

75 percent

shit i would have taken it all ...fuckin slut dont deserve to live let alone anything else..with black and white you get gray ..there is no room in this world for gray people... should respect your race ..if not all you are is a whore anyway whodont deserve to even live he done the right thing but i would have had to see her face when left with nothing

Thanks For The Consequence

Well written Author from a man's POV. The consequence made this more palatable and yes erotic. The set up was done very well but the ending was a bit crunched - closed a little too quick I thought but overall a good read.

Mans point of view?

"Every girl talks about it...". Now, just how would a man know that?

Pretty good but incomplete story. The absence of conflict, the easy resolution may well be possible. Might even happen sometimes. It's just not very interesting.

Oh, and he probably cannot get away with stealing shared assets.

a great story,but it shows how far we got to go

you could write a white wife fucks her hubby dad or brother and it would be alright,but a black man heaven behold.there are white women who look for black men out of guilt for what miscarriage of justice in slavery and racist in this country.then there black men who look for white women as payback for the same reasons.but just what would happen if a nice and decent man and woman of any race fall in love and marry with the american dream.this is america we live in and hitlers germany.i'm a black male and been with women all over the world in the dark room i can't tell what race they belong too.

The ending to this story was a great one

Any whore wife that fucks around on her husband should be left with nothing, just the papers to lwt her know what happen and why her loving man isn't coming home any more. God for that manm he's a real man! And this white whore of a wife needed to be knocked up by a group of black men so she won't know who the daddy was and can't get aything from him except maybe a desease! Draging a black kid around for the rest of her life will slow her whoring ass down some! And every white man will know what a whore for blacks she really is. This bitch actually needs to have even more done to her like killing, as do al those other bitchs at that hotel. Fucking a black man is the worst a white bitch whore can do to her husband. They all deserve to all die.

Great ending

I have no problem with a black man and a white woman. or a white man and a black woman. The bottom line is that this whore was married. She cheated, and in my mind she got of to easy.

Great Story

The beginning was really good. But the ending was rushed. You should have had him join in and experience life. Anyway, she's better off without her cucked hubby. The twit is self-castrating. Plenty more exciting fish in the ocean for her. The part about her getting pregnant is a great little extra too. More time on details would make this a fantastic story.

Nice story....

The first paragraph made me confused about the point of view but it got clear later on. I agree with others that the ending was a bit rushed.

Great start!

I would like to hear more! Questions I have:

Hubby left her, because that is what he felt he was "supposed" to do. but maybe he has second thoughts, he loves his wife and maybe he was a little turned on by what he saw...but disgusted at the same time.

But would she take hubby back, after leaving him? Under what conditions? After all, the father of her baby-to-be isn't going to give her up...and she isn't going to give up being his toy...

Mix the answers up with a couple of good sex scenes and you have a great set of stories!
Dont pay attention to people who don't appreciate these KIND of stories. You are a great writer.

interesting story

who the hell is angela...................

i enjoyed the story,but i wanted to enjoy her

we read her enjoyment of the adultery,but i want to read of her punishment and the aftermath of when she got home.you write so good help a brother out and write about the aftermath of what happen after the good times the consequences.

A well done story

I hope the tramp got hiv along with being pregnant with a black baby she deserved it i hope the husband is doing ok i would love to read more of what he did afterwards.
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga.

Ask Angela why?

Did he ever talk to Angela and ask her why she did it and how did she get pregnant that fast if she got home when did she get home 2 months later it takes awhile to find out ?
Pat

Good Story BUT....

I agree with the comments the whore deserved nothing. He should of took everything and kicked her sorry ass out. The cheating bitch deserves nothing. After doing that to the whore it would of been great for a sort of summary where the bitch was dropped by the bastards father and she ended up on the street as a crack whore shunned by all her family. Very tired of cuckold wimp husbands. Let the husband that was wronged and cheated on kick some ass.

Angela

Someone asked who angela was she was the tramp wife
when is the epilog of the story what happened to the husband did angela fight the divorce ?

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Epilogue aka Follow-Up

C'mon he does'nt leave a letter just packs and leaves.
if she had any feelings at all for Him
she would be trying to find out why he left?
and he would want to know if the kid was his.
Curt

My white wife fucks black men. I encourage her.

Good story. Too bad the husband is so selfish that he would not allow his wife to fuck black men. My wife, daughters and my girlfriends all fuck black men. I only date women that fuck black men. I have the best sex in the world. I love to eat my wife' spussy after she fucks a black man. I also love to suck black cocks after they fuck my wife. Our black sex life is great. Walt...

to bad the wife was not a wife, just a common ho

a wife doesnt do things like this to a husband she loves

if they had talked and agreed on it fine, but woman is just a common whore basically and need to be put on the streets

LET THE LIQUDATIONS BEGIN KILL THE SLUTS AND THEIR LOVERS!!!!!!!

you made him a wimp

now i knoow

another whore he should have canceled her reservations and her cards so she couldnt us them

i would have also called in a rape in her room so the police would have busted them up.

NO MATTER THE REASON

one has to face the music and pay the piper. No running. TK U MLJ LV NV

how come in all your stories

the husband is so outstandingly weak? is your husband that wimpy?

Obviously he is not even ready to be a first level wimp. C'mon. Awful

To short he should off confronted her