All Comments on 'A Demon, A Witch and Frankenstein'

by geronimo_appleby

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sacksackover 18 years ago
very well done erotic writing.....

ideally could have been a little more related to the Halloween theme....this could have happened any time of the year.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 18 years ago
Well done

A nice vignette cleverly presented with lots of hot sex. What more could a perv want?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
My own personal fantasy..

Thanks for writing it.

cookiejarcookiejarover 18 years ago
I hang ...

With the wrong people I guess. The parties I go to are so dull compared to this. *wink* Good luck!

Cookie :)

AliyahlovinsexAliyahlovinsexover 18 years ago
Hot sex

Your story made me horny ;) I think i would have liked it even more if you would have made things more intimate or personal with the witch, but it was nice writing and a good read.

eric shawn listoeric shawn listoover 18 years ago
Hot hot hot

Hot little story. Well written. Liked the senario.

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 18 years ago
Short but

really hot. Don't pay any attention to the comment that it should have been more personal. I am assuming the relationship will get more perswonal later but for now, it was just right.

kjtattskjtattsover 18 years ago
Loved it!

Absolutely loved this! I'm going to a party soon..... I think I'll invite YOU! lol. Keep up the great stuff! xxx

jabbafat23jabbafat23about 16 years ago
typo confusion

You can both have it if you want,' the man said and it took a moment or two for his meaning to sink in.

bit of a typo here buddy, confuse me for a while otherwise Im going to find one of these Halloween parties, that was hot!

jabbafat23jabbafat23about 16 years ago
it got fixed!

Sorry, either my eyes werent working properly or i miss read it but it seems to be all good now

DonGraham333DonGraham333over 10 years ago
V Good.

Was this a gentleman's excuse me?

Or, witch do you want?

Don

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623about 7 years ago
Whew!!

So hot! I absolutely loved it.

Jenna2641Jenna2641over 5 years ago
That Was Great

That was a great story. Love the detail & the bisexual exploration. So much fun. Thanks for sharing it with us.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 1 year ago

Very HOT. Sort of hope the Witch just puts her mask back on with the cum still in her hair and on her cheeks and goes back into the party for all to see. And you 2 invite Frankenstein to share your hotel room all night.

JimmcdJimmcdover 1 year ago

Love to meet a witch like her or a Frankenstein like him.. Another hot and sensual tale,,,Thanks

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