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by Anonymous

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by Tzara10/06/05

Yikes!

Erotic, scary intense, and kind of sad, all at the same time. Liked it.

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by Anonymous10/06/05

Powerful, but...

takes too long to make its point. Shocking language ends up feeling gratuitous.

Fly

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by LeBroz10/06/05

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Did so good
til reality set in
and fun fantasy
dissolves at the sink.

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by twelveoone10/06/05

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Agree with T - intense, and kind of sad, all at the same time
Disagree with F - you have a shitload (excuse, please) of powerful lines, images, I do not think you could have trimmed much, to get across what you did without it.
Boldy goes where no man has gone before...it is not "poetic" and a little disturbing, reminds me a little of WickedEve, someone else that dares not to be "poetic", not to pander. There is a lot going on here if one can force oneself to look beyond the obvious. I do not love it, it can be trimmed a little, but it is an honest 5(100).

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by 4degrees10/07/05

fuck yes

and, fuck yes.

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by Anonymous10/09/05

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OMG and holy shit! (no pun)

This is bad, it's good! I'll have to agree with another who said the message took a little too long. It should be trimmed.

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by dcpoet4410/10/05

smells dirty....

and stinks to high heaven...*LOL*...it sure gets its point across vividly. nicely done seattle......don

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by twelveoone03/22/11

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still is
I already voted
my votive
and left a comment long ago

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