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Very, very good!
The writing is lean and hot. It's the best submission in this category in weeks, if not months.
Great story!
Could have used some copy editing though: correct spelling, "its" for "it's", etc.
Aaaaaaah thank you
This is my fantasy. I fingered my pussy and cummed three times while reading it. I'm going to get out my Peter North vibrating dildo now and read it again while I fuck myself prentending I am her and getting what she got.
Hot and refreshing
This was a hot exciting story to read, its a fantasy of mine to see my wife have this type of sexual encounter someday. Well written and never boreing.
Very hot
Wonderful read. Sounds like my kind of fantasy.
I'm Sorry but
When ever a proud hubby pimps his loving wife out to others and films it, it leaves me cold and surprised by some remarks that men readers have or wish to do that.
It isn't even plausible that two married people could care so little for each other so as to disrespect each other by comprimising thier exclusive sexual intimacy with others.
For me to feel aroused it has to plausible and self cuckolding oneself is so deviantly sick I can't even fantasise the absurdity - it obviously does excite some people but I can't understand why. I wonder if normal erotic sexual activity still does it for them or must it be basely against human convention to get them off now?
Well written writer - but no respect or credibility garnered by you for this one from me and I suspect most semi-normal readers. Some of your other work is much more erotic and entertaining.
Implausible, yet hot
Was it plausible? No, not at all. Was it hot? Yes. The characters were thinly drawn stereotypes, but so what? It's smut. This is a fantasy, pure and simple. Just enjoy it.
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