Is this what you guys do in the states? You get out of bed, and you notice a truck outside. So, you grab a shotgun, walk towards the truck, tap the window with the barrel? Sick society?
Anyway, author's English and grammar are good. Story line is interesting. I'll keep reading, but sure wonder about you people down there.
Nice characters and story growth. Looking forward to next chapters and how she brings it together Great imagery and scenes, highly descriptive can't wait for the erotica but will read towards it as writen and intended by author. Worth it ..
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Is this what you guys do in the states? You get out of bed, and you notice a truck outside. So, you grab a shotgun, walk towards the truck, tap the window with the barrel? Sick society?
Anyway, author's English and grammar are good. Story line is interesting. I'll keep reading, but sure wonder about you people down there.
Excellent great development
Nice characters and story growth. Looking forward to next chapters and how she brings it together Great imagery and scenes, highly descriptive can't wait for the erotica but will read towards it as writen and intended by author. Worth it ..
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