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Butterfly Kisses Ch. 03

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by Anonymous06/14/07

what?

Where are the details in between, what happens next?

This story is too short without having the detail. Add a "what's next" or SOMETHING...all this is, is a wank off story for YOU...not your readers, It's limp, sorry.

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