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A Year and A Day

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by Anonymous

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by hugo_sam10/08/05

Enjoyable

Entertaining story of a believed ghostly encounter. Well done. The suspense is real.

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by 10/09/05

Nice read Og.

disproving the theory that yes, Virginia, there are ghosts. Nicely done.

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by sack10/11/05

fantastic writing, Og

a very interesting story to read, full of rich detail and joie de vivre! A masterpiece!

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by Extreme Bohunk10/13/05

Great story!

Fantastic Og, thanks for the writing lesson.
You sure can spin 'em!

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by Aliyahlovinsex10/26/05

hmmm

Ok what I liked about this story was the plot. It worked well, especially with all the little details like e-bay. It was very suspenseful. But on the other hand, I kind of found that the story itself was dragging, as if maybe you weren't very interested in it. That's just the feeling I got from it. But I still think the storyline was fantastic :) So keep writing...no one likes my stories either, but hey you can't please everyone :D

Ali

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by Anonymous10/27/05

dunno

Nice plot but something about your writing itself left me cold.

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by Anonymous03/28/10

excellent work ! Totally in love with it..

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