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Entertaining story of a believed ghostly encounter. Well done. The suspense is real.
Nice read Og.
disproving the theory that yes, Virginia, there are ghosts. Nicely done.
fantastic writing, Og
a very interesting story to read, full of rich detail and joie de vivre! A masterpiece!
Great story!
Fantastic Og, thanks for the writing lesson.
You sure can spin 'em!
hmmm
Ok what I liked about this story was the plot. It worked well, especially with all the little details like e-bay. It was very suspenseful. But on the other hand, I kind of found that the story itself was dragging, as if maybe you weren't very interested in it. That's just the feeling I got from it. But I still think the storyline was fantastic :) So keep writing...no one likes my stories either, but hey you can't please everyone :D
Ali
dunno
Nice plot but something about your writing itself left me cold.
excellent work ! Totally in love with it..
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