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Well done...
Nicely written. There was a good lead-in, gradual build-up and great action. Altogether, a fine way to spend the few minutes it took to read it.
...I might wonder at actually using "vagina" as a descriptor, but she's proper English, so I can slide.
...I'm also sorry she ran away in the end – but there is a hint there could be sequels. I'd read them if there were!
Great hot story
What a great story. Wish she had gone on a few more days before leaving, Could we have a repeat with a dozen older men.
A Real Pole Raiser
Hi Kay,
Read this, the first on your list now I'm going to read the rest to see if they're as good as this one.
I hope they'll all be as stimulating.
GOOD JOB
Very hot Kay-Dee had many experiences myself .keep up the good work . Have written several stories myself will try to post them soon ty for your stories.
Fantastic!
A much more honest, natural sounding story than a lot of the porno-style, pap usually submitted here.
Awwww
this story is very good, but to have that actually happen to you must suck. Sounds like you got roofy-d
good writing
Lovely!
When she gets DP'd all I could think of was "I want that! I want that!", if it had been me I think I would have stayed and been their slave:) Great story.
Fantastic!
You write so well! Just love it! I know the feeling of almost being addicted to sex, to wanting to fuck & be fucked so much it sometimes seems to effect my judgement. You described it so well. Perfect!
On content, I found it mostly good, but did NOT like the degrading, the embarrassing, mean way you were treated. I did like you choosing to get away from this, and making a fulfilling life for yourself. Wanting to be a little 'slutty' sounds yummy, if your lover likes you, respects you, loves giving you what you want and need.
say what!?!?
She's crazy! I would have stayed.
OH to have met you
Oh what fun it would be to meet you when you fancy being bad, great story loved the descriptions , well paced and quite believable just enough detail of the men and great feelings from her
Speechless
It really was to bad that Robin didn't have more going on for him. You would have made a perfect wife if you knew how to cook. Super hot and if they had treated you right I could have seen you wanting it regularly. He was a fool.
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