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Any idiot can make like a critic;
to wit:
"Crickets sing under a full hung Moon,
give me life,
then give me a room.
Bull frogs bellow with a tenor ear
give me supper
and a good cold beer.
The Moon is a flower blooming
each night above
lunacy boiled in flaming red blood
Full Moon over me light my way
cradled till morning
when comes the day."
The critic's job's easy,
to tell you what's wrong;
the creator's job's harder,
writing words without song.
A fun piece Art ~ well done.
Yah...
...what he said.
Exquisite.
Loved how this Poet used nocturnal animals to bring out the beauty of this poem. "Crickets singing ~ Bull frogs bellowing..." such lovely night sounds.
The poem..
created startling images and they were no longer alone as the night came alive with sounds...Nicely done.
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