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what with killing self for a woman
chicken shit of a man.a million women looking for a good man.no common sense.
As a woman
I agree with the husband point of view but instead of the gun he should have use something else that probably wouldn't land him in jail just because the wife is a slut
a waste
She killed her husband, and goes on. Another was killed, too. As an alternative, a camera to take the pics to get rid of her and get at Mark. Susan would divorce mark, and he'd be hurt in short and long term.
The bullets replaced by damning images,longer lasting. he could have the possibility to find what Linda couldn't give him. A waste of a decent life.
Obviously an early story
Your editor at the time certainly let you down. Actually, I had to stop reading it on the first page, with all the "seen"s, various misspellings, "regress back", etc.
While at it though, I want to congratulate you that you write in different genres, not just "Loving Wives." It is true that many stories cross genres.
Regards
what i dont understand is
why did you leave when you caught them the 1st time, I went to my car and cried. I have dealt with a lot of cheated on husbands. 100% are hurt but I have only seen on cry and that was because he put her in the ICU for 2 months. So why cry, once he caught them, put a cap in her ass not his, Men listen to what I'm saying. He didnt rape her, she gave it up willingly, so why fight for some bitch that isn't worh fighting for.
There is a lot you don't understand
huecuck. For instance, how to write in complete sentences, organize a coherent thought, or spell multisyllabic words. However, you do understand cuckoldry, being an admitted one yourself.
Enjoyed it
"Then I did something I would never have thought I could ever do." Really? After just killing a guy he is astonished by hitting his wife? Thanks or the offering.
Excellent
He did what he had to do. If she didn't lie, they would still be together. Stupid cunt had to lie. Bitch.
I have nothing else to live for
What a stupid statement. Too bad ruined a pretty good story.
Another Stupid Wife
He asked her to be HONEST, not to tell him that was the only time she cheated.
@Drbeamer3333
He meant before this he never thought he'd hit a woman.
Obviously he's not surprised he did NOW!
apropos
Chuck set this up and she lost respect for him. I mean you display your wife to another man and thinks she values herself afterwards! Chuck got the tramp he wanted. He should do some time for Deadly Assault if not murder.
Stupid
What a stupid story!
HE WANTED TO BE A CUCK...HE WAS
his ego took over and shit happened. TK U MLJ LV NV
Only Problem
If he leaves her for cheating, there goes his "rape" excuse.
sorry he should shot her also accidently as friendly fire
get rid of the whole mess in one easy time
Amazing
A truly amazing story.
Pretty dumb move breaking up just after killing her boyfriend
Now she can go to cops and tell them the truth and then say that he threatened her if she didn't go along with his version of the events.
good story
considering the emotional state he was in, I would say he did quite well. Of course he did make a few mistakes, and he will probably be caught. The authors spiel in the beginning is so straight on. The idea, or fantasy is one thing, the act and realization is quite another.
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